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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目：Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportormusic,andothersarenotHoweverzitissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobecomeagoodsportspersonormusician.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.1 .话题和题型分类教育类；双边讨论题型2 .题目分析是否每个孩子都能成为明星3 .思路提示A.观点1天分预

2、示着成功天分是取得成功的动力没有天分的人只能后天学会一些技巧B.观点2因材施教的普及兴趣才是最好的老师SampleAnswerTherelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityinzforexample,sportandmusic.Ipersonallythinkthat,aswithallquestionsofnatureversusnurture,theyareofthesameimportancef

3、orapersonssuccess.（首段开篇摆明观点:天赋与训练同样重要）Obviouslyzeducationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencanbeeffectivelytaughttoacquiredifferentskills,includingthoseassociatedwithsportandmusic.Sofromourownschoolexperience,wecanfindplentyofevidencetosupporttheviewthatachildcanacquiretheseskillswithcontinue

4、dteachingandguidedpractice.（文章第二段，分析认为训练重要一方的观点）However,somepeoplebelievethatinnatetalentiswhatdifferentiatesapersonwhohasbeentrainedtoplayasportoraninstrumentfromthosewhobecomegoodplayers.Inotherwordszthereismoretotheskillthanalearnedtechnique,andthisextratalentcannotbetaughtznomatterhowgoodtheteac

5、herorhowfrequentlyachildpractices.（本段是文章第二三段，分析认为天赋重要一方的观点）Ipersonallythinkthatsomepeopledohavetalentsthatareprobablyinheritedviatheirgenes.Suchtalentscangiveindividualsafacilityforcertainskillsthatallowthemtoexcel,whilemorehard-workingstudentsnevermanagetoreachacomparablelevel.Nevertheless,naturean

6、dnurturearenotmutuallyexclusive.Goodmusiciansandexceptionalsportsstarshaveprobablysucceededbecauseofbothgoodtrainingandnaturaltalent.Withoutthenaturaltalent,continuoustrainingwouldbeneitherattractivenorproductive,andwithoutthetraining,thechildwouldnotlearnhowtoexploitanddeveloptheirtalent.（文章第四段，强调作

7、者观点）Inconclusion,Iagreethatanychildcanbetaughtparticularskills,buttobereallygoodinareassuchasmusicandsportzthensomenaturaltalentisrequiredandcanhelpthemsucceed.（全文总结重申观点）满分要素剖析:语言表达本文先从两种不同的看法切入，后综合双方观点强调作者自身的砍伐,使得论证更加客观与全面。本文使用连接词，如：ObViOUsly,sozhowever,inotherwords,inconclusion,令文章更流畅连贯。Obviouslyz

8、educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencanbeeffectivelytaughttoacquiredifferentskills,includingthoseassociatedwithsportandmusic.用ObViOUSly引起句子，连接上下文。Inotherwords,thereismoretotheskillthanalearnedtechnique,andthisextratalentcannotbetaughtznomatterhowgoodtheteacherorhowfrequentlyachildpract

9、ices.Inotherwords表明后文是对前文的解释，对论据进行更深的分析。Withoutthenaturaltalent,continuoustrainingwouldbeneitherattractivenorproductive,andwithoutthetraining,thechildwouldnotlearnhowtoexploitanddeveloptheirtalent句型withoutA,B.zandwithoutB,A表明二者紧密相关,不可分割，准确地表达了作者的观点。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，二、三两段分别就双方观点进行论述，第四

10、段讲两方综合，强调天赋与训练同样重要。最后一段作者总结全文，重申自己的观点。题目:Somepeopleprefertospendtheirlivesdoingthesamethingsandavoidingchange.Otherszhoweverzthinkthatchangeisalwaysagoodthing.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.1 .话题和题型分类抽象类；双边讨论题型2 .题目分析经常做出改变的利弊3 .思路提示A.拒绝改变世界在不停改变，人类无法停止B.做出改变改变有时只是为了少部分人的利益SampleAnswerOv

11、erthelasthalfcenturythepaceofchangeinthelifeofhumanbeingshasincreasedbeyondourwildestexpectations.Thishasbeendrivenbytechnologyandscientificbreakthroughsthatarechangingthewaypeopleviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis.Inotherwords,changeisnotalwaysapersonaloption,butaninescapablefactoflife,anditisimporta

12、ntthatpeopleconstantlyadapttokeeppacewithit.（首段开篇摆明观点:改变是不可避免的，人们的脚步应该跟上改变）Thosepeoplewhobelievetheyhaveachievedsomesecuritybydoingthesamezfamiliarthingsarelivingindenial.Evenwhenpeoplebelievetheyareresistingchange；theythemselvescannotstoptheworldaroundthemfromaltering.Soonerorlatertheywillfindthatt

13、hefamiliarjobsnolongerexist,orthatthesafepatternsofbehaviorarenolongerappropriate.（文章第二段从观点的反面进行让步，使得论述更加客观辩证）However,reachingtheconclusionthatchangeisinevitableisnotthesameasassumingthatchangeisalwaysforthebetter.Unfortunately,itisnotalwaysthecasethatnewthingsarepromotedbecausetheyhavegoodimpactsfo

14、rthemajorityofpeople.Alotofinnovationsaremadewiththeaimofmakingmoneyforafewindividuals.Thisisbecauseitistherichandpowerfulpeopleinoursocietywhoareabletoimposechanges（suchasinworkingconditionsorpropertydevelopments）thatareintheirowninterests.（本段是文章第三段从正面论证观点：改变是不可避免的，但并不都是好的）Inconclusion,Iwouldsaytha

15、tchangecanbestimulatingandenergizingforindividualswhentheypursueitthemselves.Atthesametime,notalltypesofchange,includingthatwhichisimposedonpeople；donotnecessarilyhavegoodoutcomes.（全文总结强调观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文多处使用定语从句、宾语从句，显示出作者的语言水平。文章流畅连贯，清晰地表达了作者的观点。Thishasbeendrivenbytechnologyandscientificbreakthroughsthatarechangingthewaypeopleviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis.句型Thishasbeendrivenby.可用于议论文中说明原因。Inconclusion,Iwouldsaythatchangecanbestimulatingandenergizingforindividualswhentheypursueitthemselves.句型InConCIUSiOn可用于议论文尾端总结全文。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，二、三两段分别从正反两面进行论述，使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者强调自己的观点。