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1、2017年高考续写Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.MOmsuggested-again-thatweshouldputitupsomewherebeautifulsoastoexperienceamemorabletrip.Atlast,Dadagreed.However,DaVidand1werestillworriedaboutit.ThenDadspentabouthalfanhourpersuadingusandofcoursehesucceeded.At2p.m.,wefounda

2、perfectplaceforcamping.Wetookoutthetentfromourcar,andputituptogether,whichgaveusasenseofachievement.Asamatteroffact,theideathatMomcameupwithturnedouttobewonderfulandunforgettable.Paragraph2:WedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatSighlSalongtheway.Forexample,thereisabeautifullakeinastate.Itswale

3、risclearandcalm.DavidandIcouldn,twaittoswiminit.Afterswimming,weaskedDadtoteachusfishing.Tooursurprise,wetwobrotherscaughtalotoffishforthefirsttime,whichisbeyondourexpectation!Dadroastedthemall,whichwereextremelydelicious.Then,MOmlookedbackonherchildhoodwhenshewentcampingwithherparents,whichmadeDavi

4、dandIevendoubtthatsometimesshewasnotfbrgeiful.Eventually,wevisitedmytwosetsofgrandparents,andwe,llneverforgettheinterestingdetailsinthetrip.文章主线有趣的童年一母亲的性格一回忆一次旅行一去看望祖父母、外祖父母一与朋友告别一启程一返回家拿遗落的东西一再次出发一紧张一找旅馆一可续写线索：找到旅馆后的事?旅行中的其他趣事?所看到的景色?反映妈妈性格的事?到达祖父母、外祖父母家之后的事情?这次旅行的感受？已给提示词汇：absent-minded,forgetful

5、,trip,David,camping,tent,Mom,Dad,trouble,nice续写可能用到的词汇：forest,stream,rock,berry,valley,steep,cave,lake,calm,waterfall,toone,sgreatjoy,breakdown.2018届学生考试作文Thenextdaywerememberthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Sofascinatingatentwasitthatwefeltobligedtouseit.However,westillobjectedtoMom,sridiculouspr

6、oposalthattosetupourtentinacompletestranger,sbackyard,evenifitwaslikely-looking.ThenitsuddenlyoccurredtomethatwecouldhaveasplendidexperienceCamDinginavacantforestwithnounexpectedvisitorstobotherus.Unfortunately,nosoonerhadIbroughtupwiththeexcellentideathanMomdesperatelyannouncedthatthetentwasmissing

7、.Wordsfailedmeduetofrustration.Afteralongsearchingcameoutinvain,allofuslapsedintosilence,continuingourtent-freeandboringtrip.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Withoutthetent,wespentmoretimesightseeingoutsidethecarratherthanrelaxinginthetent.Actually,werealizedthatwhatattr

8、actedusmostwasnot(hosebooksorgameswetookfromhome,butthefantasticviewswesawalongtheroad.Eyesbeamingwithdelight,Wefinallyarrivedatmygrandparents,house,onlytofindoutthatourbrand-newtentlayflatlyinthebottomofthesuitcase.Withalittledisappointment,however,Iowedthisremarkablejourneyexperienceandalotofmyaffectionfortravellingtomyabsen-mindedandforgetfulMom.