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词性不分词性不分是英语造句中的忌讳。英语注重形态，词性和用法是相对应的，例如名词是绝对不可以充当谓语的，而充当谓语的绝对不允许由形容词单独承担。所以如果词性错了就意味着其用法也可能出错，这样的句子一定对文章的准确表达有所影响。造句过程中我们要特别注意以下几点：第一，动词要分清及物与否，不及物动词不直接跟宾语，不用于被动语态。第二，分清楚形容词和动词，形容词不能做谓语，动词的谓语形式不能做表语。第三，动词的谓语形式（有时、体、态、气的形态表示）和动词的非谓语形式（动名词、不定式、分词）要区别开来。第四，要分清现在分词和过去分词的使用场合。第五，意义相同但词性不同的词要特别注意。第六，拼写相同但意义不同、词性不同的词也要特别注意。巩固练习：改正句子。1. Chinahasoccurredthegreatchangesinrecentyears.2. Heveryexcellentinmanyaspects.1.1 cansurethatyouwillseeabetterfilm.4. Inthischaoticsociety,wearemorelikelytobeedepress.5. Humanbeingisakindofanimalfullingofdifferentfeelings.6. Nowadaysitissurprisedthatmanystudentscaretheirappearanceandclothesbutrarepaygreatattentiontotheirstudy.7. Ifyouareeasilytogetfrustrated,youwillgiveup.8. Sinceyouhavebeenkeepingagoodmood,yourteacherswouldbemorelikeyou.解析：1. occur是不及物动词，它的主语应该是事物或结果，原句应改写为:GreatchangeshaveoccurredinrecentyearsinChina.2. excellent是形容词，不能充当谓语，它应该与be动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改写为：Heisveryexcellentinmanyaspects.3. sure是形容词，应该和be动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改为：IamsureIhatyouwillseeabetterfilm.4. depress是动词，不能与bee等连系动词搭配构成系表结构，原句可以改为：【nthischaoticsociety,wearemorelikelytobeedepressed.5. full是形容词，不能构成分词形式，原句可以改为：Humanbeingisakindofanimalfullofdifferentfeelings.6. surprised为过去分词演变的形容词，不能修饰物，只能修饰人，原句可以改为：Nowadaysitissurprisingthatmanystudentscaretheirappearanceandclothesbutrarelypaygreatattentiontotheirstudy.7. easily是副词，一般不能与系动词连用，应该用形容词与系动词搭配，构成系表结构，原句可以改为：Ifyouareeasytogetfrustrated,youwillgiveup.8. like既是动词又是介词，但是含义不同，Iike（V.喜欢）不能与be动词搭配，more作为副词，修饰动词的位置最好放在动词后面，原句可以改为：Sinceyouhavebeenkeepingagoodmood,yourteacherswouldlikeyoubetter.人称不一致人称一致不仅指在一句话中主语应该保持一致，而且在一篇文章中，前后的称谓也应当保持一致，不能出现混乱的情况。巩固练习：改正句子。1. Theyhavetherightofdiscussingwithherhusband.2. Oneseriousproblemthatinfluenceachild'shealthydevelopmentisthattheydonothaveenoughpsychologicalspace.3. Admittedly,therearemerittobotharguments.ButIdobelievethatgamedogoodtochildren.3.1 oftenbuyclothesonsalebecausewecansavealotofmoneythatway.5. Studentsoftenfocusonvocabulary,butyouneedtorealizethatvocabularyisonlyonepartofalanguage.6. Themitteedebatedwhethertoallowitsfamiliestoattendthedinner.7. Thequestionthatinterestusishowweshouldprotectenvironmentfrombeingpollutedfurther.8. Inotherwords,one'sactionsaredecidedbytheirmoodindirectly.9. Ifpeoplehaveagoodmood,hewillfaceeverythinghappenedcalmly.正确句子：1. Theyhavetherightofdiscussingwiththeirhusbands.2. Oneseriousproblemthatinfluencesachild'shealthydevelopmentisthattheydonothaveenoughpsychologicalspace.3. Admittedly,therearemeritstobotharguments.ButIdobelievethatgamedogoodtochildren.3.1 oftenbuyclothesonsalebecauseIcansavealotofmoneythatway.5. Studentsoftenfocusonvocabulary,buttheyneedtorealizethatvocabularyisonlyonepartofalanguage.6. Themitteedebatedwhethertoallowtheirfamiliestoattendthedinner.7. Thequestionthatinterestsusishowweshouldprotectenvironmentfrombeingpollutedfurther.8. Inotherwords,one'sactionsaredecidedbyhismoodindirectly.9. Ifpeoplehaveagoodmood,theywillfaceeverythinghappenedcalmly.主谓不一致在四、六级写作中，考生经常出现主谓不一致问题。所谓主谓一致指的是英语句子的主语和谓语在人称和数上应保持一致。它可分为三种情况：(1)语法一致，即主语为单数形式，谓语动词也采取单数形式；主语为复数形式，谓语动词亦采用复数形式。(2)意念一致，即从意义着眼处理主谓一致问题。有时，主语形式为单数，但意义为更数，谓语动词依据意义而定，也采取复数形式。(3)比邻一致，即”就近原则”也就是说谓语动词的人称和数往往应与其最近的主语保持一致。巩固练习：改正句子。mewomenarenotsecretaryintheoffice,instead,theybeemanagerofthepany.2. Misconceptionsaboutapeshasturnedarelativelypeacefulanimalintoaterrifyingmonster.3. Therisingcostofnecessitieslikefoodandshelterforcemanyelderlypeopletoliveinpoverty.4. Inthedistanceareabillowofblacksmoke.5. Here,sthebooksyouwant.6. Neithertheunionleadersnorthenegotiatorwantthestriketocontinue.7. IneighteenthcenturyFrance,makeupandhighheelswaswornbymen.8. Eachofthechild'sthirtyfurstuffedanimalshaveanameandanentirelifehistory.解析：1. Somewomenarenotsecretariesintheoffice;instead,theybeemanagersofthepany.2. Misconceptionsabouttheapehaveturnedarelativelypeacefulanimalintoaterrifyingmonster.3. Therisingcostofnecessitieslikefoodandshelterforcesmanyelderlypeopletoliveinpoverty.4. Inthedistanceisabillowofblacksmoke.5. Here,rethebooksyouwant.6. Neithertheunionleadersnorthenegotiatorwantsthestriketocontinue.7. IneighteenthcenturyFrance,makeupandhighheelswerewornbymen.8. Eachofthechild'sthirtyfourstuffedanimalshasanameandanentirelifehistory.时态不一致在造句时要注意时态也应该保持一致。巩固练习：改正句子。1. Themotorbikewasred,andtherearetwopersonsonthemotorbike.2. Hetoldmehewillbeagoodtennisplayerthenextyearwhenwemetonatrain.3. IfIfailedtoachievemydesire,1willthinkitesfromafatebeyondmypower.4. However,ifthegoalsareobtained,myendlesseffortsbringthemtome.5. Noonecoulddenythatputershavemadeourlifeconvenientandmakeourworkefficient.6. Dependingonputer,manyproblemscanbeeasilysolved,whichisnotpossible20yearsago.解析：1. Themotorbikewasred,andthereweretwopersonsonthemotorbike.2. Hetoldmehewouldbeagdtennisplayerthenextyearwhenwemetonatrain.3. IfIfailedtoachievemydesire,1wouldthinkitesfromafatebeyondmypower.4. However,ifthegoalsareobta