一段式续写导学-亲情篇公开课教案教学设计课件资料.docx

一段式续写导学亲情篇亲情：与父亲的一次通信It,shardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfatherstoplay-protector,provider-canmakethemseemimpenetrable（不可理角军的）.That,showitwaswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrantcommunity.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn,tgettoseehimloosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn,ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhenwewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythatway.BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesanddreams,lovesandheartbreaksletalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforustohandle.1didn,twanttothreatentheintegrity（完整）ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedtoit,anditmademefeelsecure.Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareerxxxxahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadtochange.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathehadfacedthemtoo.1neededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlike1hadlostmine.Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethekey.Anemailcanbecrafted（精心制作）slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortabledistanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He'dbeupinhisoffice-acomfortableplacefilledwithbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.dbeatmydeskinanapartment20minutesaway.SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhefeltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimself,somethingthatwouldgivememuch-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascannedthree-pagedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reachedbackintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,longing,self-doubt,fearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,1gotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.Iwasalsoimpressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedinthefaceofdifficulty.注意：1 .续写词数应为100左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.王萋而容：本文讲述了一个我与父亲的故事：我有一个不善言辞、拙于与我交流的父亲。我习惯了父亲这种相处方式，习惯了他的封闭自我的硬壳。但是，当我的事业和人际关系一落千丈时，我渴望与父亲交流，想要了解父亲的过去，了解父亲的喜乐悲伤，希望父亲能够给我意见，让我找回自我，在事业和关系上的问题能够得以解决。带着这样的心，我给父亲写了一封电子邮件，希望能够通过这种方式，打开彼此的心扉。两个星期我收到了他的电子邮件。续写首句为：我关闭邮件，开始哭泣。基于此和本文的文本特点，指导学上在阅读的时候，先把握主要情节和作者的情感变化，同时抓住主要人物的关键事件和性格特征。注重引导学生抓住原文的主要伏笔：父亲在十岁时来到加拿大，并在移民区定居等。文本很多是作者的内心独白,从作者的叙述中，我们知道了故事的背景，发展，转折点和高潮，以及作者的情感变化。语言朴实，情感真挚，很容易引起读者的共鸣。【精彩句子翻译】1 .这是父亲第一次向我倾诉.thatDadhadpouredouttome.2 .父亲深信，尽管生活中有许多起伏，但它仍将翻开美丽的新篇章。（ChaPter,upsanddowns）3 .父亲相信我能消除阻碍我前进的恐惧和障碍，勇敢地施未知。（fears,嬴R最有嬴）4 .正如一句名言所说，乌云背后有阳光。5 .父亲的实用的建议让我在复杂多样化的世界里航行.（XXXC篇阅读词汇）